This is our trailer which we have edited a bit, as you can see, the difference from this version to the one posted before hand, we have cut out the close up on the 'Fathers' face of him looking angry, this is because we feel that the audience do not need to see this and should be left to wonder what will happen when he has angrily arrisen from the table. We have slow motioned the 'Father' arrising from the table and also the 'Father hitting the daughter' to give this more impact. We have also cut down the shot of the door and the shot where the daughter falls to the ground as we felt that this went on for too long. However, this still goes on for one minute and around 5 seconds which is too long considering we have to add in the words that appear on the screen on our storyboard, therefore we will either need to cut out some unnessecary shots or cut them down.
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Wow! This is really eerie, it has a dream-like quality to it. The added sound effects help to increase that unsettling feeling as well. Well done! Very impressive!
ReplyDeleteYou could think about revisiting the film shoot again, but with a revised storyboard. Some more thought on how to add some depth to the actual narrative would see this idea develop in even more exciting ways....