could this be the new magazine cover?

After looking at the teacher comments and taking this into consideration we decided that we could change some things around in order to make our magazine cover appear less bulky and more realistic. Therefore, I changed the magazine cover around a little, i enlarged the main image that advertises our film, which covers the whole of the cover. However, in order to encourporate mordern images as this is a black and white silent movie produced in 2009 however set in the 1930's, i put a thin black boarder around the edge of our two modern day images that link with the subheadings. I have also added a tagline as when looking at other magazines they appear to do this. As with enlarging this main image, so that it didnt appear over strethced and ruin the quality of the image, it had to be cropped meaning parts of the daughter were cut short, however, when looking at this it does give the image more feel and manages to relate to the narrative, portraying the daughter as a metaphor, who has half of her missing, due to the fact that she has lost her mother and has been negleted to her father. Above is this new magazine cover however in tomorrows lesson we need to decide whether to use this or the previous cover created.